Glory would be playable if it gave only a single creature protection until end of turn
I feel like this is one of the most well-realized precon decks ever out of the box, so you dont necessarily need to change 30% of the cards straight away even if I told you to jam a few games, talk with your group about the power level you want, and then decide where you want to land on the scale between AFR Set Constructed Venture Tribal and Legacy Reanimator Combo
My BGS experience is minimal but I do know that lower grade BGS is more lenient than PSA, so youd likely be looking at a higher floor
The Precon List Before we talk upgrades, let's take a look at the stock list to see what we're working with: A lot of folks say Hosts of Mordor is an unfocused pile of cards but this is just a poor shallow analysis of the deck: looking at the numbers indicate that it's pretty well-focused on Graveyard and Spellslinger: I count 27 Graveyard cards, counting any card that mills (Forbidden Alchemy), discards (The Balrog of Moria), reanimates (Extract from Darkness), or can be cast from the graveyard (Wake the Dragon)
Factory-sealed Jungle Unlimited Pokmon booster pack (1999, vintage WOTC)